Ha! This is great. I lived in China for a couple of years (before the pandemic) and loved the ease with which I could get anything delivered to my door.
Whenever I publish something that was already published in Hebrew online I add a link but since most of the stuff here is brand new and the platform is tricky when it comes to Hebrew , I’m afraid that most of the stuff here will come out in my new collection planned to come out in Hebrew next September. Sorry!
I read the other comments. What's wrong with me? I think this story is strange, like maybe you had injested some bad mushrooms while writing it. The shopping part is great!
It is a weird story. I can say that whenever I enter a sale (I try to avoid it) I feel as if I’m under some attack on my individuality , confusing me and not letting me cling to who I am. I’ve tried to share some of that nightmarish feeling in the story. It may have not worked ..,
Loved it! Takes me back to the day I became a father. "She looks just like you" was the most commonly uttered sentence that day.
Nurses, staff, relatives, every single person seemed to be driven by some innate urge to reassure us, that the baby was definitely ours.
But here in this piece, it’s unbelievably beautiful how you bundled up all the insecurity of a sterile husband in these five words. This sentence is a complete story in itself.
In a world of art created by AI, fast-food and delivery to the door, I completely dipped in the story. It gives me a sad smile, saying: ''Some day this fiction could be just a possibility."
Hey Etgar! This was a great story, and it reminded me of a story of my own, which was published in a little online magazine in 2021. I wanted to send you a link to it and discovered the mag had gone defunct! So I republished it on Substack instead. I have a hunch you’d enjoy it.
My favorite customer 
Ha! This is great. I lived in China for a couple of years (before the pandemic) and loved the ease with which I could get anything delivered to my door.
Here's to dumb and ugly babies! Love your stuff,
Carolyn Staley
Seattle
Lovely story, I could just feel the Hebrew language oozing out of every inch of the translation.
Is there no way for an avid fan to somehow see these in their original form?
I'd understand if not but it's worth a try/comment:)
Hi Ynon,
Whenever I publish something that was already published in Hebrew online I add a link but since most of the stuff here is brand new and the platform is tricky when it comes to Hebrew , I’m afraid that most of the stuff here will come out in my new collection planned to come out in Hebrew next September. Sorry!
אתאזר בסבלנות עד אז:)
I read the other comments. What's wrong with me? I think this story is strange, like maybe you had injested some bad mushrooms while writing it. The shopping part is great!
It is a weird story. I can say that whenever I enter a sale (I try to avoid it) I feel as if I’m under some attack on my individuality , confusing me and not letting me cling to who I am. I’ve tried to share some of that nightmarish feeling in the story. It may have not worked ..,
An enlightening response. Thanks!
Loved it! Takes me back to the day I became a father. "She looks just like you" was the most commonly uttered sentence that day.
Nurses, staff, relatives, every single person seemed to be driven by some innate urge to reassure us, that the baby was definitely ours.
But here in this piece, it’s unbelievably beautiful how you bundled up all the insecurity of a sterile husband in these five words. This sentence is a complete story in itself.
Thank for creating such amazing art.
I looooove this
In a world of art created by AI, fast-food and delivery to the door, I completely dipped in the story. It gives me a sad smile, saying: ''Some day this fiction could be just a possibility."
You stupid. I’m single and very happy.
I am stupid. And I'm very glad that you are happy.
Wonderful! I love the dream. "Customer", indeed!
Hey Etgar! This was a great story, and it reminded me of a story of my own, which was published in a little online magazine in 2021. I wanted to send you a link to it and discovered the mag had gone defunct! So I republished it on Substack instead. I have a hunch you’d enjoy it.
Here’s a link: https://open.substack.com/pub/practicespace/p/the-box?r=1tks3b&utm_medium=ios